And, unfortunately, it's going to be another hellacious one. (I should probably add hellacious to my list of favorite words.)
I'm a little annoyed because I feel like I have to start from scratch with my booklet design. I'm also annoyed because I don't think there have to be people in everything. My booklet is not about people. It's about packing and what to pack and in what order. Showing someone putting something in a suitcase is a little boring to me (and anyway, if I showed one picture of a person, then I couldn't use the pictures of outfits/clothes because then there would be that little inconsistency problem we all heard about in class on Saturday).
What I was really going for was a combination of Lucky mag's "A Week's Worth of Style" feature and one of InStyle's regular articles (the name escapes me right now- Chic Simple maybe???). Lucky's article lays all the clothes and accessories out like I did and then shows the person in different outfits. Unfortunately, I can't show people unless I do a photoshoot (or a whole lot of annoying work in Photoshop). So, I opted to use the InStyle method of laying the clothes out in outfits without people. I'll be the first to admit, my comp wasn't in a finished state (probably my worst comp all semester), so maybe that's why Stephanie didn't get it (at least my text was okay other than the edits I already wanted to make), but I'm at a complete loss as to how to fix this design mess. Definitely not the way I wanted to end the semester. I thought this would be an easy week. I guess not.
For starters, I think I'm going to shrink the size of the booklet so I can print it on better quality paper. Then, I think I'm going to move to one or two steps per page. I have a slightly faint idea of what the new design will be- something with a polaroid type image (maybe). I really have no idea.
On a more positive note, I am so glad the Flash project is over. I feel like what I turned in is good enough for the grade I want.
I wish we had more time between this semester and summer classes. But, we don't. I'll be back for Hypermedia a week and a half after Words & Images ends. At least I'll have August to recuperate. Then in the fall, I'm taking Motion Graphics and Writing for the Marketplace. Yep, I changed my schedule again, but I think this one will stick. I've been meaning to get into freelance magazine writing (and go beyond just webzines) since I was an undergrad, but just never got around to it. This class might be the push I need.
Monday, May 12, 2008
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i'm sorry but eric spilled a beer on the puzzle we were working on. i had to use the word "moist" to describe the pieces. i thought of you. :)
hmmm... Decided against Typography + motion at the same time eh?
Probably a good idea. Though I'm concerned my Digital Economy class may not have enough people.
I may grab a spot in the writing class just in case, though I noticed Visual and Verbal Rhet is being offered on Saturday from 1-3pm which isn't too bad. better the 9-3!
My hellacious heart goes out to you. Remember, Stephanie shouldn't be grading on the design. (Not that I'd know this because she put in several comments about my design in my last grade... what?)
For what it's worth, I don't think you should start over IF you'll be happy with it once you're done. If you think the missing copy was the big problem and you're comfortable that it'll work once the copy is there, why not go with your gutt?
But, if her criticism confirmed your own suspicions that you didn't want to voice, then maybe take another stab.
This morning started out awful. Walking from the house to the car, the cuffs of my pants got moist. ;)
Sorry, can't resist.
Moist. OMG. I can barely type it. I'm glad you all are amused at my intense hatred of that word.
Mark-
I actually think the writing course is going to be more work than the typography class. I just decided I'd rather take the writing class when it's offered and fits my schedule. I'll take typography in the spring since it will probably be easier to fit into my schedule because it's usually offered in multiple timeslots. No Saturday classes. Ever. Again.
Stacie-
It's hard to say if I feel like the fully fleshed out design will work. It needed more than just text to fix it, but overall, I think the concept could work. But then again, I'm not the one grading these assignments. I think I'll play around with a few different ideas. It would be nice to get it down to a smaller size so I could print on better paper.
Here's to the last hellacious week of the semester!
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